I'm still curious as of why some stories just get bombarded with comments and some almost don't get any responses at all. It could be the warnings in this case. But still... This story deserves a lot of praise, if you ask me! It was beautiful. Totally, utterly. And I have to say it was kind of unexpected. The warnings, well... Warned me of slavery and D/s, two things I'm not very fond of. Not to say that I dislike it, but they are not the kind of things I'd look for in a story. Reading the whole thing left me astonished, so beautiful!