ext_135188 ([identity profile] utteramusement.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-06-21 12:43 am (UTC)

I was on my way to bed, but just had to read this before I did!

OK I loved this as usual, I loved the description of Harry's 'magic-demo' it gave me chills (crappy pun, I know. Couldn't help it!) Also I was so proud of Harry in this chapter (and I think I'm just proud of who Harry has evolved to now, since his always awesome lately) and glad Draco figured out Lucius' spell-usage(? is that a legitimate word? o_O)

I won't mention all the funny lines, but I'll say I'm glad you added the humor into it :D

Found a typo... thus that hs spell was still undiscovered.

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