Hello, it's my first time to comment, long time reader~ there were times when I wanted to comment but a lot of the other comments said what was on my mind.

A lot of people are frustrated at this Harry and instead sympathize with Draco, it seems like, because it's 'in the way' of developing romance. But I like this calm Harry, I think his little insecurities makes him kind of adorable and refreshing as oppose to often written venturous Harry, but I suppose some are tired of the self-sacrificing quality Harry tends to have. I don't think Harry is dispassionate about things, he's just more cautious about how he express himself. Lastly, if Draco really wants Harry to listen to him about the potion, maybe he should be willingly truthful to Harry about Daphne to earn that trust and respect. To me, that's a bit selfish of him to demand that of Harry and yet he's too prideful to offer something back.

That said, I rarely read fan fictions in this fandom since I am bias towards a more dominate Draco and a reluctantly submissive Harry, and it's rare to find fics of such nature. Even though that's not your style either, the variety of originality and refinement in your stories keeps me reading and loving them. I think you're the only fan fiction author I read actually.